I know i might not be the expert in marketing, but sometimes i do think that i know how to attract and sell things to people.
Say you a member passing by a notice board in a gym. There's a poster of a coming theme class. The concept is CIRCUS. Which of the following will attract your attention and make you interested to join?
My proposal ~
The Circus :
Come join the circus and be a PARTY ANIMAL. A dance party that will make you Gaga all the way.
( Key word : Circus, animal and wild )
( Dress code : Anything that brings out the animal in you )
The final result ~
The Dance Party :
Join us as we party to the funkiest music, injected with quirkiest dance moves. Everyone is welcome and bring your friend down to clown with us.
( Key word : Circus, clown and fun )
( Dress code : Colorful )
When i saw the poster, i nearly vomit blood!!!
Cos i asked for ANIMAL and they gave me CLOWN !!!
PEKCEK ahhhhhhh !!!
animals are NOT clown !!!
Sometimes it's really sucks when you are trying to get people out of the box.
15 hours ago